When watching our sequence back i noticed an improvement that could be made for it. In the shot where the victims brother finds him dead there is no sign as to how he has died and this could create confusion when watching as people other than us do not know our aims from this. the victim is against a tree looking lifeless and u cannot tell how he has died but when you find out he has been burnt it creates confusion as the shot you see does not show this at all his skin is clean and looks normal. We should have partially created the effect of burnt skin even though there is a distance between the camera and the actors, this should have been done to give a more effective and realistic view on the piece. Also the ground around him is settled and looks undisturbed this should have been cleared of leaves and maybe had some sort of burnt residue around the victim to also add to the realistic view of the piece as not having this looks unrealistic once you have discovered what has happened.
Posted By Sonja Moss
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OK - good to see that you are still evaluating Sonja. Now you all need to get on with the individual evaluations as advised on the sheet I gave you. These must be finished with visuals and be interesting and revealing as well as evaluative, by the end of next week at the latest! Don't risk the high grade you could get for the product by leaving the evaluations too late!
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