1st script innfluence

After deciding on the story and developing characters we wanted to create a little bit of dialogue to assist the cinematography and establish some character for the film. The complicated part is making the story suffice as not only an intro but as a scene we can lead into later in the story as it is also part of the ending. we wanted to make it gritty and try to avoid the Hollywood style of thrillers. I went for diolouge based on that of British gang films such as snatch. To add a thrilling effect i brought the lords prayer in as religion is a thrilling subject and can be used in many ways. One character uses it for redemption before death, another as a power statement. It is a very dramatic speech and works extremely well in the sense of a strong opening and ending to the film.