Thursday, 22 January 2009

peer evaluation.

Location/ setting-3,5,4,4,5,5,5,5,5,4
Comments: Simple, Unique, scary, realistic, anonymous, bleak, ambiguous.

Props-4,3,5,5,5,4,5,5,4
comments: simple, effective, good use of hat, significant.

Lighting-5,5,5,5,5,5,5,5,5,5
comments: Amazing, effective, harsh, sinister, invading, excellent, creates mood, carefully placed.

Costume and make up-4,4,4,4,4,4,4,5,4
comments: Brilliant, believable, evil, possibly made Joe more scruffy. Dan needs shoes!

camera framing-4,4,5,5,5,4,4,5,4
comments: Not steady on first shot, close ups good, well framed.

variety of frames-4,4,5,4,5,4,5,5,4
comments: Wide, impressive, very well used, simple, effective.

angles-5,4,5,5,5,4,5,5,4
commments: Interesting, vareiety, consistant, shows character.

movement-4,4,2,3,4,5,5,4
comments:good, lil quick in one shot, good movement around hostage, flowed well

180 degree rule-5,5,5,5,4,4,5,4
comments:broken adding effect. confusing in a good way. Really good.

match on action-1,1,1,1,3,5,5,3
Comments: wasnt one, didnt see it, not included i dont think, not allot needed, worked well.

shot/ reverse shot-5,5,5,5,4,5,5,4
comments: excellent to show reaction, used very well, good facial expressions, showed character relationships well.

Our responses.

Match on action: when watching the piece back we showed we actually give 5 examples of this technique. With the statement a piece is edited well when the audience dont notice the edits, we feel 1's are a compliment to our work.

movement: we ran a little quick on one shot, however it was difficult to shoot as it was fast action and quite a tight shot.

Shot duration: Some shots were possibly a little too long, by placing others in we get better angles and more variety.

Costume and setting clash: Due to the location of the shoot Dan wasnt wearing any shoes. However this can easily be corrected when we come to shoot the real deal.

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